Originally Posted by Alphavictim

Good one. I personally feel it's a tad too fast, though. Especially in an acoustic arrangement, the song benefits from some additional breathing room. The vocals also do some runs you didn't include (it's actually do-o-ocks, but you played one note) - try playing it slower, you'll be able to play around with the melody a bit more.

The rhythmic clapping is great, but like Ice said, the melody in the prechorus is off. Great use of dynamics in the solo too.