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Old 01-18-2022, 08:05 PM
Alphavictim Alphavictim is offline
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Good stuff, thanks for sharing! I really dig the general approach, the melody just works very well this way. But was the main track recorded in one go? Some of the phrasing (of the melody) seems a bit off.

Also, at the 3 minute mark, you could have just gone off into some atmospheric stuff and build up, citing motives and stuff, go nuts. The soundscape you had going at that point certainly would have allowed it. It was a bit of a letdown for the track to just be over at that point. I wanted more!

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