Aloha !

Why did you say that you hated Jon again?

Let me explain a few things to you when you want to make a parody. As you probably now I'm the best, but I'll gladly teach you a few things.

1.Make sure that it makes sense.
The first 2 lines make it look like it's a song for the Jon haters, but the 3rd and 4rd line doesn't make sense, as it's sung from the perspective of someone that is not really happy with Jon Bon Jovi, the same story for the chorus.

2.Make the lyrics correct.
I mean "I know you think my voice is awesome sound" WTF is that all about? It should've been something like "I know you think my voice has got an awesome sound. In that way it fits the melody, plus it's correct and doesn't sound like a Chinese man that just finished his first English class.

3.Don't tell any untrue things.
"He can't respond, so I keep calling him out". If he'd register he could respond, just like any other person can do. Plus, a few people might not dare to say the things they say over here in real life, but most of the complainers, and I'm sure the ones that you had in mind when you wrote the song, are no cowards. So no untrue bullsh1t. That's just foolish and makes the song silly.

But overall, a nice attempt of making a good parody, but it's not a classic that wil be remembered. Sorry.

Salaam Aleikum,
Sebastiaan