I read your lyrics, and I noticed a few mistakes. I hope you don't mind my correcting them! Of course, I could be wrong too. Take a listen to the song and let me know what you think. This could get a little confusing, so here's how I'll write this. I'll put your lyrics first, then mine. Kay? Here goes:

If this bad love between us
The feelings are the same

If there's bad blood between us
The feeling's unsaid

Let's have a one last goodbye

Deserve one last goodbye

There's a pain in a viewing a beautiful light

There's a painting of you in a beautiful light

Like a priceless final device

Like a priceless fine work of art

I don't wanna command you so let me explain

I don't wanna convince you. Don't make me explain.

But don't comes no sad eyes

When dawn comes, no sad-eyes

(Rendezvous) For the rendezvous

(Rendezvous) Final rendezvous

(I love you) For that's I love you

(I love you) One last I love you

What do you think?

BTW, man, you can IM me anytime you want. I'm twinkleglo on YIM and twinkleglo@hotmail.com on MSN. Talk to you later!