It takes a VERY long time to get going. I don't know a thing about deep house music, but personally I'd cut the "drum" intro by loads, and bring in either the vocal sample or the talkbox sample far earlier .... possibly do something else in the outro too. And maybe include more vocal samples than just the first two lines

But then, as I said, I know nothing about deep house, so possibly those are all stupid suggestions! At the very least, it's creative, interesting, and different, so well done for that