It takes a VERY long time to get going. I don't know a thing about deep house music, but personally I'd cut the "drum" intro by loads, and bring in either the vocal sample or the talkbox sample far earlier .... possibly do something else in the outro too. And maybe include more vocal samples than just the first two lines
But then, as I said, I know nothing about deep house, so possibly those are all stupid suggestions! At the very least, it's creative, interesting, and different, so well done for that
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Sometimes you can just lay down
You can play the game
You can take the cards that they deal ya
And you can just pretend it's all over
BUT NOT ME!!!
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