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Old 07-10-2020, 09:39 AM
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So after a few months, finally "finished". Feel free to post some feedback. Its the original backing track that leaked, cut in places to get rid of some of that twangy guitar, add a solo section etc.

Massive thank you to rickysambo, a fellow dry county member for playing them shredding guitars, and adding some life to the song.

Its not the final version of the song, as I'll implement whatever feedback I get if necessary, and fix anything I don't like after listening to it for a bit.

Would anyone be keen to make a music video? Maybe something like the New York tribute or something. Otherwise I'll slap some random clips together and post the song on youtube, when I get the time.

Hope you enjoy!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19-b...ew?usp=sharing
I can hear an influenced Richie Sambora guitar solo and almost an Alec voice >_< jaja.
Anyway, I don't like it.
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Old 07-10-2020, 02:54 PM
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The new vocal melody in the chorus is worse than the original IMO. The lead up to the solo was by far the best part, but everything sounds like it's soaked in reverb. Also, some of these transitions are quite harsh. I dig the backing vocals in the last chorus. Not a fan of the intro noodling; it's less catchy than before.

Vocals aren't bad but sound rather strained in places. For example, the "WIIIIIISH" in the chorus is especially guilty of this.

Also, one criticism I have of the song is that it's lacking dynamics. The difference in intensity between the verses and the chorus is not especially pronounced; the verses sound super busy (did you raise the tempo?), and the chorus is very shouty. There's little room to breathe. Could have used the quiet intro-build up after the solo before you go into the chorus, for example. Instead, it's just BAM BAM BAM.
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Old 07-10-2020, 05:46 PM
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So after a few months, finally "finished". Feel free to post some feedback. Its the original backing track that leaked, cut in places to get rid of some of that twangy guitar, add a solo section etc.

Massive thank you to rickysambo, a fellow dry county member for playing them shredding guitars, and adding some life to the song.

Its not the final version of the song, as I'll implement whatever feedback I get if necessary, and fix anything I don't like after listening to it for a bit.

Would anyone be keen to make a music video? Maybe something like the New York tribute or something. Otherwise I'll slap some random clips together and post the song on youtube, when I get the time.

Hope you enjoy!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19-b...ew?usp=sharing
Awesome! I really enjoyed listening to that. Great job!
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Old 07-10-2020, 07:34 PM
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So after a few months, finally "finished". Feel free to post some feedback. Its the original backing track that leaked, cut in places to get rid of some of that twangy guitar, add a solo section etc.

Massive thank you to rickysambo, a fellow dry county member for playing them shredding guitars, and adding some life to the song.

Its not the final version of the song, as I'll implement whatever feedback I get if necessary, and fix anything I don't like after listening to it for a bit.

Would anyone be keen to make a music video? Maybe something like the New York tribute or something. Otherwise I'll slap some random clips together and post the song on youtube, when I get the time.

Hope you enjoy!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19-b...ew?usp=sharing
I love the solo! Great job, guys!
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