Maybe it will sound crazy but, to me, the chorus seems to be quite similar to You Give Love a Bad Name, not only Rich Man Livin'. Its only the production that makes it a lot more... well, 'modern', but the verses sounds quite the same, only at a slower pace. It lacks a lot of the power that YGLABN has, of course, but I think that with the right arrangaments this song could be a great one. I can't wait to hear the full thing!

PS: God, I wish it has a more... rocker production!