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Old 08-19-2009, 03:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Kathleen View Post
This is indeed one of the problems. It needs to sound edgier and it needs some proper guitar. I like the idea - I like the words - most of them anyway. I could do without all the yeahs in the chorus. It's the execution that's the problem.
I agree. I think the verses are actually decent lyrics it's everything from the production, the lack of guitar, and the horrible chorus that made me overlook the quality of the lyrics to the verses.
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