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Originally Posted by mreto
martin, you give of course a much more professional answer, but i wanted to change as little as possible, cause i think that a text that already sounds perfect isn't always the right thing.
people who read it must think that she wrote it herself with her (not yet perfect) german. but that's probably only my opinion...
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yep- you're completely right! if she takes my version they must think that she asked a native speaker to correct the letter- but i wanted to show her common expressions- i think she'll learn from that...
so girl, take his version
