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Old 07-23-2003, 10:09 PM
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Post your favourite ones here, or silly ones that you have made up yourself.

Worker bees can leave,
Even drones can fly away,
The queen is their slave.

Without just one nest,
A bird can call the world home,
Life is your career.

Flowers bloom and die,
Wind bring butterflies or snow,
A stone won't notice.

A tiger can smile,
A snake will say it loves you,
Lies make us evil.

I got those from the Fight Club novel by Chuck Palahniuk.
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Old 07-24-2003, 12:27 AM
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Old 07-24-2003, 12:31 AM
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Walrus eating fish
Kinda colostomyish
Jim he likes his fish

Do NOT ask!

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i used to know some but i forgot them
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I dug up an old haiku that I wrote almost exactly two years ago. It's a two-part haiku.

The Child
What a pretty bird
Sitting in a cherry tree
I'll watch him all day

The Bird
What's up with this kid?
I don't like his sappy face
I'm leaving this dump
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5 syllable
7 syllable
5 syllable

right?
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Old 07-25-2003, 03:06 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Keba
I dug up an old haiku that I wrote almost exactly two years ago. It's a two-part haiku.

The Child
What a pretty bird
Sitting in a cherry tree
I'll watch him all day

The Bird
What's up with this kid?
I don't like his sappy face
I'm leaving this dump
Are you quite sure thats the right way round?

Keep On Rockin'
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Old 07-25-2003, 03:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Shaun
5 syllable
7 syllable
5 syllable

right?
Yep

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Old 07-25-2003, 09:49 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Keba
I dug up an old haiku that I wrote almost exactly two years ago. It's a two-part haiku.

The Child
What a pretty bird
Sitting in a cherry tree
I'll watch him all day

The Bird
What's up with this kid?
I don't like his sappy face
I'm leaving this dump
Are you quite sure thats the right way round?

Keep On Rockin'
Yeah. Why? Something wrong?
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Old 07-25-2003, 10:14 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Keba
Quote:
Originally Posted by The Walrus
Quote:
Originally Posted by Keba
I dug up an old haiku that I wrote almost exactly two years ago. It's a two-part haiku.

The Child
What a pretty bird
Sitting in a cherry tree
I'll watch him all day

The Bird
What's up with this kid?
I don't like his sappy face
I'm leaving this dump
Are you quite sure thats the right way round?

Keep On Rockin'
Yeah. Why? Something wrong?
Obviously I'm out of touch

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