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Old 03-25-2003, 07:35 PM
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Ain't it a bit too long?

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Old 03-25-2003, 08:54 PM
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your first writin!!!!
not bad
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Having in mind it's ure first try i think you should keep it up...even i don't like it .

the next one will be better but try to put a meaning behind the words,make the readers think about what you wanted to say...
that's missing in ure poems...it's like reading a love song by a boyband .
the same story again and agian.

Sorry i was so hard but i always say what is on my mind!
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I give you cake. Cake makes you feel better!
**gives large piece of cake to you** YAAAAAAY!!
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I give you cake. Cake makes you feel better!
**gives large piece of cake to you** YAAAAAAY!!
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Oh, shush up - im not that bad ... bwhahahahahahahaha...
Oh dear... heh..
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I give you cake. Cake makes you feel better!
**gives large piece of cake to you** YAAAAAAY!!
Weirdo

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You just witnessed a little piece of her big crazy pizza-pied personality.
Oh, shush up - im not that bad ... bwhahahahahahahaha...
Oh dear... heh..
Reincarnationofjonspants, are you, by chance, an anime junkie? You remind me a lot of my anime junkie friends.
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