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Old 08-01-2002, 06:57 PM
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INTRO:
My Hero,
My Hero, his life, my love, my life
My hero in my world above
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i´m just a man who understands, that sometimes something has to end
in my small world, in my small soul, my hero takes over my control
i dream the dream of a "wanna be" how "got to be" and everybody will see
that i´m the one that rock´s this world like no one else, cause i´m the best

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i take a sheet, i take a pen, i write down a few word´s i can
my hero say´s "take me as i am", he´s the perfekt man, do you understand ?

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New Jersey, the state of my existense
New Jersey, please take me back where i belong
New Jersey, show me that just i´m the one
take me back where i´m from
New Jersey
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my melody will take control, the crowd went wild, they can feel my soul
the feeling of thousands clapping hands, people who scream, shout and dance
the crowd know´s every single word, every single song they´ve ever heard
hey god, please never let me down, cause you show me where i am from

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i take a sheet, i take a pen, i write down a few notes i can
my hero say´s "please stay the same", he´s the perfekt man, do you understand ?

REF:
New Jersey, the state of my existense
New Jersey, please take me back where i belong
New Jersey, show me that just i´m the one
take me back where i´m from
New Jersey
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BRIDGE:
In these days, hey god, everything stays the same
In these days, hey man, take me as i am
In these days, my friend, let it rock till the end
in these days, hey baby, c´mon c´mon c´mon, show me your hero, yeah !

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REF:
New Jersey, the state of my existense
New Jersey, please take me back where i belong
New Jersey, show me that just i´m the one
take me back where i´m from
New Jersey
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(and the hero say´s

hey man, c´mon, please wake up now, you´re late, you have to go right now
your rockstar dream is over now, no song´s, no stage, no screaming fan´s
just you, your work and nothing else......
New Jersey
New Jersey
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OUTRO:

My hero
My hero, his state, my life, my home
My hero in my world alone



(i´ve just written this song for me, what do you think, please let me know !!!)
best wishes
WJM
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Old 08-01-2002, 07:54 PM
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Pretty cool!!!

Do you have the music for it? Or just the lyrics?
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Old 08-01-2002, 07:57 PM
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i´ve also the music for it in my ears !!
when i got home today, i must take my guitar an try it out !!
thank´s for replying
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Old 08-01-2002, 08:15 PM
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Could you record it and send it to my e-mail? I like hearing other people´s song

I´m a writer/composer as well and I also sing in a band. I write a lotta songs for other people besides my band, so I´d love to take a listen to yours
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Old 08-01-2002, 08:18 PM
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sure, when i go to the studio next time, shure !!
but i also have a homepage (www.joerg-veselka.com)
but i just like "save a prayer" !!
the second song (on the beach) is very bad !!
but take a look !!
This song´s were my first two, that i´ve recorded !
take a look
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Old 08-01-2002, 08:47 PM
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gonna check it out, thanks
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Old 08-01-2002, 08:55 PM
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OMG! Joe Elliott from Def Leppard´s among us :P

Just kidding. Nice songs. Your voice sounds pretty much like Elliot´s, hehe
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Old 08-01-2002, 09:03 PM
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*g*´ i´m getting red, i´m not very proud of this songs !!
i think "save a prayer" sound´s a little bit like a bon jovi ballad !!!
on the beach is a very very weak song *getting more red*
but thank´s that you compair me with joe *verycool*
but this was just my first step in a studio, and for 4 hours of recording time, it´s not tooo bad *g*
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Old 08-02-2002, 06:02 AM
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very good... yeah, that first song sounds a lot like Bon Jovi

When I get in the studio with my band to record something I´ll let you know so I can get you an MP3 of it
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Old 08-04-2002, 11:12 PM
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Hey, not bad!
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