Thanks. Yeah I agree it is whiny. People always tell me I'm over emotional. So I agree with that 100 % ... 200 % even . But I look at it this way. I'm a writer and if I wasn't as over emotional as I am at times I couldn't write. I don't mean to say that all writers have to be so emotional. Some just tend to be more then others. But you know what I mean. haha


I just got myself out of a very bad situation. A situation where I was ignorant enough to let myself be treated that way for five years. Man if you knew all of the awful things I had thrown at me , believe me you would understand why the poem is so whiny.


But anyway thanks for the response. Your right it does need a little bit more fixing up and improving. I'll work a little more on it.