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Old 06-18-2003, 02:18 AM
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Crap is used by Default, so I can't imagine why there'd be a problem using it in one of our songs. But yeah, the alternative would sound more...authentic? Is that the word I'm looking for? And what are you talking about inverted commas? I didn't get that part...

Walrus:I'd like for the first or second verse to be about a seperation of the 2 friends the song describes. The first verse you got is fine, we just need to add to it. Or do we? What do you think? I'll start working on it.

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I agree with Mr2001, it should be sh**

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I agree with Mr2001, it should be sh**

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Yep that is the magic word.
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Hi:
I'm gonna take a whack at another verse. How 'bout this?

I'll Do Anything For You
I remember when you said that to me
The worst day of my life
The day we parted, I lost a part of me

What do you think? Sounds too much like a ballad to me. And I'm not to keen on rhyming me with me, but that's all I could come up with at the moment.

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Crap is used by Default, so I can't imagine why there'd be a problem using it in one of our songs. But yeah, the alternative would sound more...authentic? Is that the word I'm looking for? And what are you talking about inverted commas? I didn't get that part...

Walrus:I'd like for the first or second verse to be about a seperation of the 2 friends the song describes. The first verse you got is fine, we just need to add to it. Or do we? What do you think? I'll start working on it.

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sorry mate, thought you were using the inverted commas so it didn't get censored and we all knew what it was. not that we couldn't have guessed anyway!
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Old 06-24-2003, 01:06 AM
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Is anyone still interested in continuing this? I know I am.

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i am. you guys have done a great job on the songs so far. i just haven't had time to work on the cover art yet.
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Two seperate bits, the second part might work for a pre chorus, what do ya think?

Remember the old days
Shootin the breeze
Not carin' bout right or wrong
Seemed like everything
Was ours for the taking
Guess I should have known all along (feel free to change this line)

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Back then it seemed we were always winning
But now our teams been torn apart
I wish we could go back to the beginning
Can't you take us back to the start?



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ooooooooh late i know, but can i join your band??

i can provide references and everythign
and proof that i can sing ROCK (and play acoustic guitar)
alternatively i know lots about the business side of a band and stuff, and do some songwriting too....

pleeeeeeeease ?
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I'm also really intrested in it. Actually i love they way you and Walrus teaming up. Who know you both can make big time someday.

So meanwhile u guys keep going, i'll be alway there.
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