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Old 07-28-2003, 12:13 PM
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Right, here's my first draft 1st verse for "Back Into Dry County":

The sand still haunts me
In every one of my nightmares
Breathing deep I still can taste
That dusty desert air
Would you ever go back into Hell
If you got the chance to leave?
Would you miss the pain
Miss the burnin' heat
Miss the people who can't breathe?

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Oh my goodness...that's great. WOW!
Your not, by any chance, being sarcastic are you?

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Old 07-28-2003, 12:34 PM
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Right, here's my first draft 1st verse for "Back Into Dry County":

The sand still haunts me
In every one of my nightmares
Breathing deep I still can taste
That dusty desert air
Would you ever go back into Hell
If you got the chance to leave?
Would you miss the pain
Miss the burnin' heat
Miss the people who can't breathe?

Keep On Rockin'
Oh my goodness...that's great. WOW!
Your not, by any chance, being sarcastic are you?

Keep On Rockin'
No way! I truly think that's cool. Reminds me of Metallica's Unforgiven II. To re-write the same song would be something amazing.

I'd love to be involved in this, by my life is crazy right now and my time is consumed. I feel pretty happy that you'd consider me though.
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Old 07-28-2003, 05:32 PM
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Right, here's my first draft 1st verse for "Back Into Dry County":

The sand still haunts me
In every one of my nightmares
Breathing deep I still can taste
That dusty desert air
Would you ever go back into Hell
If you got the chance to leave?
Would you miss the pain
Miss the burnin' heat
Miss the people who can't breathe?

Keep On Rockin'
Oh my goodness...that's great. WOW!
Your not, by any chance, being sarcastic are you?

Keep On Rockin'
No way! I truly think that's cool. Reminds me of Metallica's Unforgiven II. To re-write the same song would be something amazing.

I'd love to be involved in this, by my life is crazy right now and my time is consumed. I feel pretty happy that you'd consider me though.
I can understand it, i hope ur making good progress in music. But keep on visiting here when u have time.
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Old 07-28-2003, 08:42 PM
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Right, here's my first draft 1st verse for "Back Into Dry County":

The sand still haunts me
In every one of my nightmares
Breathing deep I still can taste
That dusty desert air
Would you ever go back into Hell
If you got the chance to leave?
Would you miss the pain
Miss the burnin' heat
Miss the people who can't breathe?

Keep On Rockin'
Oh my goodness...that's great. WOW!
Your not, by any chance, being sarcastic are you?

Keep On Rockin'
No way! I truly think that's cool. Reminds me of Metallica's Unforgiven II. To re-write the same song would be something amazing.

I'd love to be involved in this, by my life is crazy right now and my time is consumed. I feel pretty happy that you'd consider me though.
Well thanks Just feels kinda odd to have my work complimented by a proper singer/songwriter. Do us proud with whatever you're working on at the moment! :P

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Old 07-30-2003, 06:12 PM
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So guys anything new come up now?.
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Old 07-30-2003, 06:46 PM
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I'm working on a 2nd verse and bridge for Win Or Lose. I'll put it up when I get something but I'm kinda at a loss right now. You can probably expect something by the weekend.

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Old 07-31-2003, 01:04 AM
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Do any of the other songwriters agree with me that writing second verses is horrible? You've said most stuff in the first verse and chorus, second verses just annoy me to write

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Old 08-03-2003, 02:22 AM
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Ok, here it is, as promised, the second verse:

This has never been a game
Yet it always is
You better play it hard
Its all you get
All the pain you're going through
It doesn't matter in the end
If you get knocked down
Do you get back up again?

This'll work as a bridge:

This has never been a game
Yet it always is
You better play it hard
Its all you get

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What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
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Is this the way that it's supposed to be
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Old 08-06-2003, 09:03 AM
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Ok, here it is, as promised, the second verse:

This has never been a game
Yet it always is
You better play it hard
Its all you get
All the pain you're going through
It doesn't matter in the end
If you get knocked down
Do you get back up again?

This'll work as a bridge:

This has never been a game
Yet it always is
You better play it hard
Its all you get

Adrian
Good work, so what next.? :P
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Old 08-07-2003, 05:21 PM
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if you ever need anyone in your band who can do strings (like on "the distance") then u could have me...
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