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hmmmmm.... no it doesn't and there are nicer ways to say things like that - stop being so arrogant!
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@Adrian: That lyric sounds like you ripped several parts of Jovi's songs and put them together. Be original a little bit..
Which one? I know for a fact Bon Jovi doesn't do rap-rock...

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Hi Guys, i'm finally leaving my town 'Heart break Town' for good.
My flight is confirmed on 26th morning. I just can't wait to go there, although i miss my family here very much. Hopefuly i can do what ever i going there to do.
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Have a safe and fun trip Allmike!

Here's that speech I was talking about, for the middle of SOODC:

spoken:Do you know what it means to fear nothing? It means you love nothing so much you'd miss it. That's what I'm running to tonight. I'm running to love, and fear. And no one is getting in my way. One way or another, tonight I'm free. I WILL be free!!!

What do you guys think? I think it's pretty good.
Tawtami:Would you want to do this in the middle of SOODC? Think it could add to the song? Also, how's the guitar for Hands Of Time coming? If you're gonna do vocals soon, could you change the "him" in the second verse to "them"? Thanks.
Arash:How's the electric guitar for Heartbreak Town coming?

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hmmmmm.... no it doesn't and there are nicer ways to say things like that - stop being so arrogant!
I'm not english speaking guy so the context sometimes may not sound that good.. but you got the point. I still think that's rewritten Bon Jovi's Dry County... The same point (can't get out of here alive..), almost the same title, changed words a little bit with added new ones.
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hmmmmm.... no it doesn't and there are nicer ways to say things like that - stop being so arrogant!
I'm not english speaking guy so the context sometimes may not sound that good.. but you got the point. I still think that's rewritten Bon Jovi's Dry County... The same point (can't get out of here alive..), almost the same title, changed words a little bit with added new ones.
Thats the idea you large prat

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Here's the first part of the first verse:

Pacing this rented room
That should've been my home
Waiting for the sun to set
On everything I've known
Waiting for the stars
That'll light my way
Part of me is straining to run
And part of me wants to stay

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More for SOODC:

A hot wind exhales
Through the dusty streets
This is the night my destiny's fulfilled
One journey ends and another begins
Tonight I ride free

I see the people
All their faces look the same
I wonder if I was ever like that
So beaten down
If I ever lost my flame

What do you think? Walrus, you want to comment and/or tweak the stuff I put up?

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Am I the only one still posting here?

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