Jovitalk - Bon Jovi Fan Community
Home Register Members FAQ
 

Making of Band 'DC'...........one year on the line.......

Other Bands


Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #701  
Old 03-16-2004, 10:33 AM
tawtami tawtami is offline
Senior Member
Something for the Posts
 
Join Date: 09 May 2003
Location: sheffield, uk
Posts: 3,238
Send a message via MSN to tawtami Send a message via Yahoo to tawtami
Default

generally allmike- if im there, and not really working ill answer
__________________
Donate to our wedding fund here!


NEW ALBUM COMING OUT SOON... PM for info
Reply With Quote
  #702  
Old 03-17-2004, 04:02 PM
Adrian's Avatar
Adrian Adrian is offline
Senior Member
It's my post
 
Join Date: 31 Oct 2002
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 35
Gender: male
Posts: 4,805
Default

Sorry for not being around more - the time I spend online, and the time I can spend writing are 2 very different things... Today I'll try to add up all the stuff for SOODC that I've written here so far, and get a feel for where we are with the song. Maybe try and post some new stuff.

Adrian
__________________


What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
Reply With Quote
  #703  
Old 03-18-2004, 04:01 PM
Adrian's Avatar
Adrian Adrian is offline
Senior Member
It's my post
 
Join Date: 31 Oct 2002
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 35
Gender: male
Posts: 4,805
Default

I don't know when I decided
This place was slowly killing me
Taking my life away, one day at a time
How could I have been so blind
Now I see
For so long
I was just like everyone else
Unknowing, unwitting
Ignoring everything I knew I felt
About how wrong this all was
Nothing here can ever be right
How can you live
How can you dream
With the flaming gates still burning bright
The only light in this timeless infinite night

Chorus

Straight Outta Dry County
Tonight I ride free
No one's gotten out alive
But that's fine by me
My hands won't be tied
I'm getting out of here
Dead or alive
Some things mean more than life
I'll live free or die

A hot wind exhales
Through the dusty streets
This is the night my destiny's fulfilled
One journey ends and another begins
Tonight I ride free

I see the people
All their faces look the same
I wonder if I was ever like that
So beaten down
If I ever lost my flame

Pacing this rented room
That should've been my home
Waiting for the sun to set
On everything I've known
Waiting for the stars
That'll light my way
Part of me is straining to run
And part of me wants to stay

Ok, there's what I've written so far. Arash, Tawtami, you want to to comment/tweak any of it? I'll try and write some in the next few days, though spring break is coming up (all of next week) and I don't think I'll be able to write then. I'll try though.

Adrian
__________________


What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
Reply With Quote
  #704  
Old 03-19-2004, 01:28 AM
Arash's Avatar
Arash Arash is offline
Senior Member
These Days
 
Join Date: 04 Aug 2002
Age: 37
Gender: male
Posts: 2,509
Default

hi, i havent been around for sometiems....
the heartbreak town is about to finish, im still working on the solo to get the right tune...
adrian, i liked soodc, ill send feedbacks on it soon...

well, saturday is the new year in iran, so i think i wont be able to come here for somedays, but ill be back soon with hbt....


so see u guys soon!
Reply With Quote
  #705  
Old 03-19-2004, 12:12 PM
allmike's Avatar
allmike allmike is offline
Senior Member
I Don't Want To Post Forever
 
Join Date: 04 Dec 2002
Location: india, now in Dubai
Age: 45
Gender: male
Posts: 13,407
Send a message via MSN to allmike Send a message via Yahoo to allmike
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Arash
hi, i havent been around for sometiems....
the heartbreak town is about to finish, im still working on the solo to get the right tune...
adrian, i liked soodc, ill send feedbacks on it soon...

well, saturday is the new year in iran, so i think i wont be able to come here for somedays, but ill be back soon with hbt....


so see u guys soon!
Happy New year to you Arash. I hope you enjoy every much. We will be waiting for u to finish the HBT soon. Mean time not much happening here although Tawtami is working on new song. so we can hear lot of thing preety soon.

Adrian that is great song. I'm not been writing any song for some time, may start one soon. By the way what is ur MSN id, so we can chat on msn too.
__________________
I wish I was a neutron bomb, for once I could go off
I wish I was a sacrifice but somehow still lived on
I wish I was a sentimental ornament you hung on
The Christmas tree, I wish I was the star that went on top
I wish I was the evidence, I wish I was the grounds
For 50 million hands upraised and open toward the sky
Reply With Quote
  #706  
Old 03-20-2004, 12:01 AM
Adrian's Avatar
Adrian Adrian is offline
Senior Member
It's my post
 
Join Date: 31 Oct 2002
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 35
Gender: male
Posts: 4,805
Default

Happy New Year Arash!!! Have a great time!

Hopefully I'll have a new verse or two soon. I'm having a hard time coming up with anything at the moment.

Adrian
__________________


What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
Reply With Quote
  #707  
Old 03-21-2004, 06:26 PM
Adrian's Avatar
Adrian Adrian is offline
Senior Member
It's my post
 
Join Date: 31 Oct 2002
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 35
Gender: male
Posts: 4,805
Default

Got a new part:

Crossing the line
Between just being alive
And living my life
I realize
All the time I've been here
I've been missing this all the time

Adjust it , tweak it, feel free to change it. I figure it'd be a good ending for the second verse.

Adrian
__________________


What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
Reply With Quote
  #708  
Old 03-25-2004, 11:05 PM
Adrian's Avatar
Adrian Adrian is offline
Senior Member
It's my post
 
Join Date: 31 Oct 2002
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 35
Gender: male
Posts: 4,805
Default

Bumping this back up. Doesn't seem to be much activity here. I'm working on a new part, which I'll post soon.

Adrian
__________________


What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
Reply With Quote
  #709  
Old 03-26-2004, 12:00 PM
allmike's Avatar
allmike allmike is offline
Senior Member
I Don't Want To Post Forever
 
Join Date: 04 Dec 2002
Location: india, now in Dubai
Age: 45
Gender: male
Posts: 13,407
Send a message via MSN to allmike Send a message via Yahoo to allmike
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Adrian
Bumping this back up. Doesn't seem to be much activity here. I'm working on a new part, which I'll post soon.

Adrian
I'm really low on my crativity at a moment. I hope Arash will post electric version of HBT soon. So Adrian, meatime how about u look at the songs i sent to u some time back and also give me ur MSN id too.
__________________
I wish I was a neutron bomb, for once I could go off
I wish I was a sacrifice but somehow still lived on
I wish I was a sentimental ornament you hung on
The Christmas tree, I wish I was the star that went on top
I wish I was the evidence, I wish I was the grounds
For 50 million hands upraised and open toward the sky
Reply With Quote
  #710  
Old 03-29-2004, 01:09 AM
Adrian's Avatar
Adrian Adrian is offline
Senior Member
It's my post
 
Join Date: 31 Oct 2002
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 35
Gender: male
Posts: 4,805
Default

I'm gonna have some new stuff probably by tomorrow. I think I've got a second verse nailed down. After SOODC is finished, I'll definitely take a look at those songs you sent me.

Sorry about not replying to that PM you sent me, it kinda slipped my mind. I don't have an MSN ID...sorry.

Tawtami&Arash:How are things coming?

Wild X Wind:How's the art coming? Got any more pieces finished?

Adrian
__________________


What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
Reply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +2. The time now is 08:45 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11.
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.