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Old 06-17-2003, 04:38 PM
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Great job! Just when I thought this song was dead...we've resurrected it!

I'm not too keen on the use of the "I know we're seperated..." part in the first verse, I'd like to save it for a later verse. Though I will admit, it works nice as a prechorus.

Keep up the good work,

Adrian
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