Hi:
Crap is used by Default, so I can't imagine why there'd be a problem using it in one of our songs. But yeah, the alternative would sound more...authentic? Is that the word I'm looking for? And what are you talking about inverted commas? I didn't get that part...
Walrus:I'd like for the first or second verse to be about a seperation of the 2 friends the song describes. The first verse you got is fine, we just need to add to it. Or do we? What do you think? I'll start working on it.
Adrian