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Old 06-19-2003, 10:38 PM
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Hi:
I'm gonna take a whack at another verse. How 'bout this?

I'll Do Anything For You
I remember when you said that to me
The worst day of my life
The day we parted, I lost a part of me

What do you think? Sounds too much like a ballad to me. And I'm not to keen on rhyming me with me, but that's all I could come up with at the moment.

Adrian
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