Got another little bit. I think we'll want it to go after the "I know we're seperated" part. After the "I know" part there'll be a solo, then this, and then maybe an extended chorus.
Its all I can do
I gotta stand by you
Cause when you're loyal to someone...
You can't help it
I imagine those last two lines being spoken, then launching into the chorus. What'dya think? Any good?
Adrian
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What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
Come a little bit closer
Come here now
Let's see
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