it doesnt scan.....

the obnly way i can see of it getting more closely scanning is below but then i think its losing some of the meaning... which is also a bad thing.... tricky...


You can hope You can pray
But all good things have to change
It doesn't matter if you Win Or Lose
Its how you play the game today
All you try and all you say
It doesn't matter what you do
Its how you play the game...

Not if you Win Or Lose

of course... ive put a bit of a tune to it as well cause thats how i work, but in terms of scanning thats better (feel free to discard) but it might change some of the original sentiment.....

i dunno......
/me doesnt really like to comment...
sara