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Old 07-17-2003, 12:37 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Adrian
You want to know how to live
The future's so far away
I've got these words for you
Try to live in today
Win Or Lose
It doesn't matter
Right here right now
Not what comes after

(chorus)

You can hope You can pray
But all good things have to change
It doesn't matter if you Win Or Lose
Its how you play the game
All you try and all you say
It doesn't matter what you do (stretched out)
Its how you play the game...

Not if you Win Or Lose

Well folks, there it is, the first verse and chorus of Win Or Lose. Allmike:What do you think its missing?

Adrian
This song has a potential to be a great song . I think you need to add little bit to more line to it.
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