Originally Posted by The Walrus

Adrian, I think that you need to get over your thing of using the title in the verses and the chorus- don't use Win Or Lose in the first verse as well as the chorus. The chorus is much better now, although I'm thinking that there's nothing all that special about it.... the first verse needs a bit of work. I also think that this song has great potential, do me proud guys!

Also Adrian, I've come up for a really interesting idea for a project that I want to work on with you, and I'll give you the details as soon as I fine tune it a little.... but it will be very cool

Keep On Rockin'