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Old 10-06-2003, 04:03 PM
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Jade4Jovi:We've got a lead female vocalist, but we'll keep you in mind. By the way, do you have anyway of recording what you sing, in case you become one of the vocalists?

Got a new verse for Back, I think this will fit into the second half.

We're both looking forward
To the day when we can be together
Its coming, [but] not real soon
It'll take some time
But they can't hold me back forever
Someday this will all be through

Walrus:What do you think of the structure now? 6 lines not 4!!!

So what do you guys think? I think it could make either a good verse or an awesome prechorus.

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