Originally Posted by Adrian

Got a new verse for part one:

I think I'm makin' myself sick
Trying to think of ways to say I lied
But I stumble on my words
They just won't come out
So I just go on the way I am
Can't even say I tried
This is kinda starting to hurt
I'm starting to doubt
How I ever could've thought of you

What do you guys think about this? Not my usual structure. Walrus, you still there? Busy? If you're still interested in this, just stop in and say you're still here.
Tawtami:How're things on the recording end?

Adrian