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Old 10-26-2003, 10:54 PM
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Join Date: 03 Aug 2002
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One word
A million emotions
I can still remember the first time

Last time you said it I denied
Now I wish I hadn't lied
I ran away from you

But I came Back

That night
You thought you could speak for me
You told me I loved you
I laughed and said no
How could I see the truth

Naked on the bed you lie
I've seen your heart
From the inside
Its a nice place to visit
But to stay there
And lose being free
I knew it wasn't
For me

Thats what I thought

Last time you said it I denied
Now I wish I hadn't lied
But even though I never knew
I came back for you

But nothing changed
That I could see
You were still you
I was still me
Still just two halfs
Of a seperate whole
A one sided dance
Without a soul
Or thats the way
It seemed to me
Just a discarded memory
How could I know
That deep inside
My heart and love
Just couldn't hide?

After all
I came back for you



Bloody hell, thats long.... Right, thats my idea for the first half, what do you think? Feel free to dissect it, its very different from the way I'd normally write, so I'm not wholly confident in it, but there ya go... Comment, criticise, its all good

Keep On Rockin'
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Sometimes you can just lay down
You can play the game
You can take the cards that they deal ya
And you can just pretend it's all over
BUT NOT ME!!!
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