How DO you do it? This is great! You just outwrote Jim Steinman, you know that, don't you? One thing though:I don't like the line "Naked on the bed you lie". That just seems...I don't know...too...something. I'm sorry, I don't like it. I think its a little too adult, if you know what I mean. Could you change that one line? Thanks! I'm gonna take a crack at putting together the second part today.
Again, this is great work Walrus!
Adrian
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What part of my soul is crying
For crying out loud
What part of my heart is beating
Faster than the speed of love
Is this the way that it's supposed to be
What Part Of My Body Hurts The Most
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