Ok, I rearranged Heartbreak Town and added a few new lines. I kind of set it up like TAALS, with the 2 choruses. Here it is:

HEARTBREAK TOWN

Verse 1

This is the town
Where I learn to fly higher
This is the town
Where I built dreams of colour
All this time
My friends were friends
Love was real and life was full

Prechorus

Why does everything that starts so good have to end?
Why all these dreams come crashing down?
Too many questions
Too much pain
Too little comfort

Chorus1

Blame it on life, blame it on love
All I know is its coming down
All I blame is this town
...Heartbreak Town.

Verse 2

Prechorus

Why does everything that starts so good have to end?
Why all these dreams come crashing down?
Too many questions
Too much pain
Too little comfort

Chorus 1

Blame it on life, blame it on love
All I know is its coming down
All I blame is this town
...Heartbreak Town.

Chorus 2

Its a Heartbreak Town
I'm still feeling the pain
Its a heartbreak Town
I'm still seeing the stains
Its a no-love town
Hate is running in all its vain
Every smile is buried in its soil
I'm only a broken boy
Left to bleed and toil
In this Heartbreak Town

Guitar Solo

Bridge

Prechorus

Why does everything that starts so good have to end?
Why all these dreams come crashing down?
Too many questions
Too much pain
Too little comfort

Chorus 1

Blame it on life, blame it on love
All I know is its coming down
All I blame is this town
...Heartbreak Town.

Chorus 2

Its a Heartbreak Town
I'm still feeling the pain
Its a heartbreak Town
I'm still seeing the stains
Its a no-love town
Hate is running in all its vain
Every smile is buried in its soil
I'm only a broken boy
Left to bleed and toil
In this Heartbreak Town

What do you think? Personally, I think its Dry County-like. A great song! Allmike, you've done great work writing this song! You'll probably be putting me out of a job here soon!

Adrian