okay this is the reworked version... nothing huge done except added a little to verse 2 where there was previously the end of the prechorus making it impossible to orchestrate... other than that only a couple of word alterations to make it fit. oh and (later thought) i think the bridge should be before the solo (have moved it on this as this is what im making the track from)

okayt so actually slightly more m ajopr changes than i anticipated.... having done it.. feel free to dismiss... or to keep... there are a few major changes.. will post again in a sec and highlight them.

thoughts questions comments?



Verse 1

This is the town
Where I learn to fly higher
This is the town
Where I built dreams of colour
All this time
My friends were friends
Love was real and life was full

Prechorus

Why does everything that starts so good have to end?
Why do all these dreams come crashing down?
Too many questions
Too much pain
Too little comfort

Chorus1

Blame it on life, blame it on love
All I know is its coming down
All I blame is this town
...Heartbreak Town.

What would you feel
If your world went dark?
How would you feel
If you lost your heart?
did you ever realise
you could ever feel so alone

Prechorus

Why does everything that starts so good have to end?
Why all these dreams come crashing down?
Too many questions
Too much pain
Too little comfort

Chorus 1

Blame it on life, blame it on love
All I know is its coming down
All I blame is this town
...Heartbreak Town.

Chorus 2

Its a Heartbreak Town
I'm still feeling the pain
Its a heartbreak Town
I'm still seeing the stains
Its a no-love town
Hate is running through its veins

Every smile is buried in its soil
I'm only a broken boy
Left to bleed and toil
In this Heartbreak Town

Bridge:

Time was right, and life was good
Hard to imagine that its all gone now
time to heal some heartache
Time to leave this heartbreak town

Guitar Solo (to verse) at least thats what i think it needs to be


Prechorus

Why does everything that starts so good have to end?
Why all these dreams come crashing down?
Too many questions
Too much pain
Too little comfort

Chorus 1

Blame it on life, blame it on love
All I know is its coming down
All I blame is this town
...Heartbreak Town.

Chorus 2

Its a Heartbreak Town
I'm still feeling the pain
Its a heartbreak Town
I'm still seeing the stains
Its a no-love town
Hate is running in all its vain
Every smile is buried in its soil
I'm only a broken boy
Left to bleed and toil
In this Heartbreak Town [/i][/quote]