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Old 10-04-2004, 04:13 PM
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Glad you're back, Walrus!

Your additions are great, check out what I've tweaked/added, let me know what you think.

second chorus
Wake Me Up
And open my eyes
Wake Me Up
Can you teach me how to fly
So I can leave this all behind
Wake Me Up
And show me how to feel alive
Can you Wake Me Up

For all the times I lost my way
And all the times I thought I'd gone
The three hands must march on
And it's for you I'll always pray
To take me out of all that's wrong
Find a better place for us
A place where we belong.....


drum solo(let's give Jim something really fun to do on this one)

Show me how to feel again
Show me how to dream again
Show me how to love again
All my life is new
Can you...

Wake Me Up
And open my eyes
Wake Me Up
Can you teach me how to fly
So I can leave this all behind
Wake Me Up
And show me how to feel alive
Can you Wake Me Up

Like it? Comments? Criticism? Feel free to tweak, redo, etc and so forth. I think it needs an extended final chorus, or something else after the last one. Another few lines or something. Something different. I'm not sure what though.

Did you like the other songs I'd written in your absense?

Adrian
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