That look like good begining, i also come up with some thing let see.
Mean time u kep working on ur songs.

What do you think of the title "I'd Do Anything" or "I'd Do Anything For You"? Not to copy Meatloaf, but that would be a good title. How about this for the chorus:

I swear, as I stand here
I'd Do Anything For You
I know you'd do the same for me
I'll fight for you, and that's the truth
If you'll let me
I'll stand with you till the end
Because
I call you friend

I think it needs something in the middle there. What do you think?

Adrian

There something missing here. At a moment my creative mind is shut out, i'll come back to you later.

How 'bout this for a verse:

We weren't saints
But we were friends
Each on the outside
Always looking in

I'm still working on this song, its just taking me a while. DRAGONFLY, Walrus, you guys wanna help?

Adrian

i can see it now! all i need is hair and a beard!

i'm sure it was already clear in your mind, you'll be with hundred of girls in bikini .... splendid cars everywhere, guitar, sunglasses ! tell me i'm wrong ? :twisted:

you missed a beach, alcohol, sun and a p-diddy style necklace while i 'bounce with my hoes'

:lol:
see ? i was sure you were thinking of a video in this style ....

it's gonna be a great one !!!!

Another part of a verse, maybe part of the chorus:

Whatever you want, you got it
If you need me, I'll be there
I'll Do Anything For You
Whatever it takes, I don't care

What do you think?

Adrian

I wish everybody should have same seriousness as Adrian. :roll:

Good work adrian, I wish i would have helpd you. I'm bit busy with my stuf. I hoep i can join you soon. But keep your good work.