Hi:
Crap is used by Default, so I can't imagine why there'd be a problem using it in one of our songs. But yeah, the alternative would sound more...authentic? Is that the word I'm looking for? And what are you talking about inverted commas? I didn't get that part... :?

Walrus:I'd like for the first or second verse to be about a seperation of the 2 friends the song describes. The first verse you got is fine, we just need to add to it. Or do we? What do you think? I'll start working on it.

Adrian

I agree with Mr2001, it should be sh**

Keep On Rockin'

Yep that is the magic word. :D

Hi:
I'm gonna take a whack at another verse. How 'bout this?

I'll Do Anything For You
I remember when you said that to me
The worst day of my life
The day we parted, I lost a part of me

What do you think? Sounds too much like a ballad to me. And I'm not to keen on rhyming me with me, but that's all I could come up with at the moment.

Adrian

sorry mate, thought you were using the inverted commas so it didn't get censored and we all knew what it was. not that we couldn't have guessed anyway!

Is anyone still interested in continuing this? I know I am.

Adrian

i am. you guys have done a great job on the songs so far. i just haven't had time to work on the cover art yet.

Two seperate bits, the second part might work for a pre chorus, what do ya think?

Remember the old days
Shootin the breeze
Not carin' bout right or wrong
Seemed like everything
Was ours for the taking
Guess I should have known all along (feel free to change this line)

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Back then it seemed we were always winning
But now our teams been torn apart
I wish we could go back to the beginning
Can't you take us back to the start?



Keep On Rockin'

ooooooooh late i know, but can i join your band??

i can provide references and everythign ;-)
and proof that i can sing ROCK (and play acoustic guitar)
alternatively i know lots about the business side of a band and stuff, and do some songwriting too....

pleeeeeeeease ?

I'm also really intrested in it. Actually i love they way you and Walrus teaming up. Who know you both can make big time someday. :wink:

So meanwhile u guys keep going, i'll be alway there. 8)