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Tawtami:It's ok with me if you join, but you'll have to ask Allmike, he's our manager. :D I think he'll probably let you.
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Here's what we've got so far:
Standin' here Side by side No one said it's an easy ride Don't worry, cos I've got your back Standin' tall We're still free Together we'll fight for the dream One for all and All for one And all thats in between Remember the old days Shootin the breeze Not carin' bout right or wrong Seemed like everything Was ours for the taking Guess I should have known all along This couldn't last forever Prechorus: Back then it seemed we were always winning But now our teams been torn apart I wish we could go back to the beginning Can't you take us back to the start? Chorus: I swear, as I stand here I'd Do Anything For You Cos I know that you'd do the same for me We can live and die together But our fight will last forever If you'll let me I'll stand with you till the end Because I call you friend They say they honor loyalty It don't look that way to me But I'm not giving in I won't let go of what I believe For all the **** that we been through I never let 'em change my mind I'll always be here for you We'll come through this side by side I'll Do Anything For You I remember when you said that to me The worst day of my life The day we parted, I lost a part of me Prechorus: Back then it seemed we were always winning But now our teams been torn apart I wish we could go back to the beginning Can't you take us back to the start? Chorus: I swear, as I stand here I'd Do Anything For You Cos I know that you'd do the same for me We can live and die together But our fight will last forever If you'll let me I'll stand with you till the end Because I call you friend I know we're seperated By time and space, laws and rules But I swear I'll fight I'll stand by you I'd do anything for you Anything at all And that's the truth Great job! Walrus, you are one of the best songwriters I've ever seen! Lets keep this song going! Adrian |
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Got another little bit. I think we'll want it to go after the "I know we're seperated" part. After the "I know" part there'll be a solo, then this, and then maybe an extended chorus.
Its all I can do I gotta stand by you Cause when you're loyal to someone... You can't help it I imagine those last two lines being spoken, then launching into the chorus. What'dya think? Any good? Adrian |
Ok. Since no one voiced any objections (or even opinions) to that last bit I wrote in, here is "I'll Do Anything For You". Its a song about standing by a friend when its the hard, and even sometimes, wrong, thing to do. Please post comments, corrections, etc.
I'll Do Anything For You Standin' here Side by side No one said it's an easy ride Don't worry, cos I've got your back Standin' tall We're still free Together we'll fight for the dream One for all and All for one And all thats in between Remember the old days Shootin the breeze Not carin' bout right or wrong Seemed like everything Was ours for the taking Guess I should have known all along This couldn't last forever Prechorus: Back then it seemed we were always winning But now our teams been torn apart I wish we could go back to the beginning Can't you take us back to the start? Chorus: I swear, as I stand here I'd Do Anything For You Cos I know that you'd do the same for me We can live and die together But our fight will last forever If you'll let me I'll stand with you till the end Because I call you friend They say they honor loyalty It don't look that way to me But I'm not giving in I won't let go of what I believe For all the **** that we been through I never let 'em change my mind I'll always be here for you We'll come through this side by side I'll Do Anything For You I remember when you said that to me The worst day of my life The day we parted, I lost a part of me Prechorus: Back then it seemed we were always winning But now our teams been torn apart I wish we could go back to the beginning Can't you take us back to the start? Chorus: I swear, as I stand here I'd Do Anything For You Cos I know that you'd do the same for me We can live and die together But our fight will last forever If you'll let me I'll stand with you till the end Because I call you friend I know we're seperated By time and space, laws and rules But I swear I'll fight I'll stand by you I'd do anything for you Anything at all And that's the truth (Guitar solo) Its all I can do I gotta stand by you Cause when you're loyal to someone... You can't help it Prechorus: Back then it seemed we were always winning But now our teams been torn apart I wish we could go back to the beginning Can't you take us back to the start? Chorus: I swear, as I stand here I'd Do Anything For You Cos I know that you'd do the same for me We can live and die together But our fight will last forever If you'll let me I'll stand with you till the end Because I call you friend Big thanks to The Walrus and Allmike. You guys are great! Walrus:What do you want to do next? A ballad? The next chapter in the Dry County saga? Personally, I'd like to finish that "Win Or Lose" song I prototyped about 2 pages ago. You interested? Adrian |
Hey allmike.
okay, you can see some of my stuff BUT if you wanna listen, i warn you that the song i have on this pc on mp3 is one of the least rock things ive written... but people still seem to like it.... havent got other stuff recorded yet... other alternative is to rip some of the covers we've done in my old band off VHS if my mate can show me how.... i have the song on mp3 as does AnnU now (:D) ill post the lyrics up now and if you want it can send over yahoo or IRC already posted it in the music forum.... but hey... and anyone else who wants it and will let me know their thoughts is welcome. sara --------------------------------------- Exposed, feels so bare nothing to protect me just the clothes i wear Exposed, there for all to see im losing my control i can't keep this hold - i need the shelter to hide the pain from myself all the shame all the fear i need your cover, i need you near exposed, spewed out on the floor for everyone to gaze at for all to behold Exposed, nothing left to give now i feel so empty dont know if i can live - i need the shelter to hide the pain from myself all the shame, all the fear i need your cover i need you near im not talking i can barely breathe, what if someone says what they have seen? Exposed, now i feel so alone cringing curled in a corner it feels so cold Exposed, I turn my face to the shadows your looks are like poisoned arrows that pierce my soul im not talking i can barely breathe, what if someone says what they have seen? my greeting-card smile cannot save me now ive got to get away from here somehow... Exposed, feel so bare nothing to protect me just the clothes i wear Exposed, nothing left to give now i feel so empty dont know how i can live exposed. © S.Smith 2003 -------------------------------------------------- |
ogh yeah, dont remember if i mentioned my list of instruments...primarily sing but also am v handy playgin acoustoc aswell as singin... also play acoustic, a bit of electric, little keys, flute, clarinet, irish whistles, glock, xylophone, marimba, and some other random instruments.... in case you ever need anything a bit different ;d
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Cool! You play a lot of instruments! I vote to let you in. You've already proven you've got writing talent. :wink: By the way, I've never heard of a musical instrument called a glock. Isn't that a type of gun? :shock: Adrian |
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You can join out team of Adrian and Walrus to write some good music. :P |
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