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Just bringing this to the front again. Tawtami:Do you have something you can post? If so, send it to my via PM and I'll post it for you. Still working on "Back"...

Adrian

Ill be the main female vocalist ;) and dancer :)

Jade4Jovi:We've got a lead female vocalist, but we'll keep you in mind. By the way, do you have anyway of recording what you sing, in case you become one of the vocalists?

Got a new verse for Back, I think this will fit into the second half.

We're both looking forward
To the day when we can be together
Its coming, [but] not real soon
It'll take some time
But they can't hold me back forever
Someday this will all be through

Walrus:What do you think of the structure now? 6 lines not 4!!! :lol:

So what do you guys think? I think it could make either a good verse or an awesome prechorus.

Adrian

ive got a couple of things on the way... hopefully a successful method of recording soon... tho might end up having to borrow someone elses pc to transfer the masters.... /me smiles at goose..... cause mines not working v well (am at uni atm...)
will keep you posted.
sara

Tawtami:That's great news!
Anyone else interested in working on this song, or am I carrying the flag on this one (so to speak)?
Request to moderator:Please make this topic sticky. Thank you.

Adrian

Got a new verse for part one:

I think I'm makin' myself sick
Trying to think of ways to say I lied
But I stumble on my words
They just won't come out
So I just go on the way I am
Can't even say I tried
This is kinda starting to hurt
I'm starting to doubt
How I ever could've thought of you

What do you guys think about this? Not my usual structure. Walrus, you still there? Busy? If you're still interested in this, just stop in and say you're still here.
Tawtami:How're things on the recording end?

Adrian

Yup, i'm still on board

Keep On Rockin'

Great work guys, I have one song in my mind. I don't know whether it is good or bad, i'll post it in couple of days. Yous let me know.

Here it is , i don't it is good or bad. I just post it, u guys give me ur opnion or u can take something from it, u can do it.

HEARTBREAK TOWN

This town where i learn to fly higher
This town where i build dreams to be colour
All these time, friends were friends
Love was real and life was full....everyday

Why everything started so good turn so bad?
Why all these dreams come crashing down to hunt?
Too many questions, too little answer
Too much pain, too little comfort......nightmare.



Blame it to lick, blame it to life
All i blame is this town,.........Heartbreak town.



Its a Heartbreak town
I'm still feeling the hard pain
Its a heartbreak town
I'm still seeing the blood stain.
Its no love town
Hate is running in all its vain
Every smiles burried in its soil
Only broken boy left to weep at the distance.