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Last time I thought it was over
Thought I was done I knew it was the end But the feeling's gone And I've been numb so long Didn't think I'd ever feel like this again Today is different Now I feel so new Didn't think anyone Could me me feel the way I do Can you... Wake Me Up And open my eyes Wake Me Up Can you teach me how to fly So I can leave this all behind Wake Me Up And show me how to feel alive Can you Wake Me Up How did we get where we are today I have no past beyond right now But my future is clear I lived my life in the dark And now that you're here I can see I've got nothing to fear Wake Me Up And open my eyes Wake Me Up Can you teach me how to fly So I can leave this all behind Wake Me Up And show me how to feel alive Can you Wake Me Up This is what I've got so far. Any comments/criticisms/revisions? Anyone want to help? Tawtami:How's the recording coming? Have any songs done yet? Wild X Wind:We might've discussed this before, but could you do highway signs? The green highway signs that say stuff like "Milkwaukee 1 Mile?" One of those saying something similar about Dry County would be really cool! Adrian |
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Yeah... :? you were right, Arash... I wish we'd at least get a note every once and a while from Tawtami, so she could tell us if there's any progress. The last time she posted she said she was recording some of her stuff and working on some of ours...I'd like to think that at some point in the future she'll pop on and tell us if there's anything new to report, maybe a few demos or something.
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okay: well here's the update.
firstly, due to random things happening ive ended up working 40 hour weeks for most of the summer, which to be honest has sucked. Three weeks ago; my HDD died a horrible death, losing everything. Last weekend I *finally* got my stuff over and done with- i rushed it through in a day and it sucks to be perfectly honest, (though if anyone wants to hear it then PM me.. ) The DC stuff, fortunately i had the sense to do on audio tape; next week im back at uni, so work is less and as soon as i get the one lead im missing i can get on and get it onto HDD. Im really sorry for delaying everything, and i feel really crap about it- id totally understand if you guys want to replace me and stuff... i feel like ive let people down and i dont like that. im sorry. sara |
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As a way of forcing myself to write, I vowed I wasn't going to post till I'd finished WMU. However, that could be construed as kinda rude, since Tawtami came back. Sorry.
Glad you're back! I'm glad to hear that some DC stuff has been recorded. I look forward to hearing it. About replacing you, we wouldn't do that! Don't worry about it! :wink: IMO, every band member is irreplaceable. I'll finish the song soon, I promise. Adrian |
The last time, I thought it was over
That's it, and I was done Back then I knew it was the end But now the feeling's gone Oh, and I've been numb so long Didn't think I could ever feel like this again Today is different Now I feel so new Didn't think anyone Could make me feel the way I do Can you... Wake Me Up And open my eyes Wake Me Up Can you teach me how to fly So I can leave this all behind Wake Me Up And show me how to feel alive Can you Wake Me Up What happened to get us here today Past is cloudy beyond right now But for once my future is clear I lived my life in the void And now that you're here I can see I've got nothing to fear It all came unravelled Now I feel so new So wind the thread tightly Give me my chance renewed Can you... Wake Me Up And open my eyes Wake Me Up Can you teach me how to fly So I can leave this all behind Wake Me Up And show me how to feel alive Can you Wake Me Up For all the times I lost my way And all the times I thought I'd gone And now for every time delay The three hands must march on And it's for you I'll always pray To take me out of wrong To a place that I belong..... Don't know what you think of that, I just thought I'd have a go with like the first things that came into my head. Amended the stuff you've already written a tad, but if you don't like it, that's quite alright :) Keep On Rockin' |
Glad you're back, Walrus!
Your additions are great, check out what I've tweaked/added, let me know what you think. second chorus Wake Me Up And open my eyes Wake Me Up Can you teach me how to fly So I can leave this all behind Wake Me Up And show me how to feel alive Can you Wake Me Up For all the times I lost my way And all the times I thought I'd gone The three hands must march on And it's for you I'll always pray To take me out of all that's wrong Find a better place for us A place where we belong..... drum solo(let's give Jim something really fun to do on this one) Show me how to feel again Show me how to dream again Show me how to love again All my life is new Can you... Wake Me Up And open my eyes Wake Me Up Can you teach me how to fly So I can leave this all behind Wake Me Up And show me how to feel alive Can you Wake Me Up Like it? Comments? Criticism? Feel free to tweak, redo, etc and so forth. I think it needs an extended final chorus, or something else after the last one. Another few lines or something. Something different. I'm not sure what though. Did you like the other songs I'd written in your absense? Adrian |
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