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Old 08-22-2003, 05:05 PM
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Default Sharing a POEM I wrote for the end of the Tour......

Hope you like it...wrote it before I knew I was going to Giants on 8/8 after that night it ment even more...I love this band......ENJOY...


NEVER SAY GOODBYE....


Another end of the tour
Another one last night
The crowd has left the building
The lights have gone dim
Roadies dismantel the stage
As you fade away into the darkness

Your imprint is on our hearts
Time we have spent together
Has been eched in our minds
Another page has been written
One more moment in time

Never say good bye
Only say good night
Never walk away...
your'e a shinning star
in the blinding light

Years and miles of momories
one more time we cry...
for a band called Bon Jovi
a brotherhood of five
Jon, Richie and David
Tico and Hugh
Standing proud, singing strong for the
faithful and true

Fans by the hundreds of thousands
Have raised their hands to you in praise
Jon was the preacher, the band was the chorus
Hymns of Love, Joy and Hope
were the sermons that you gave
We have all come to worship in the house that
Jovi "ROCK " has built

Never say goodbye
Only say good nite
Never walk away...
Your'e a shinning star
In the blinding light

The church's foundation is sturdy
Fans united in one undieing quest
To love this band forever...with this our
montra.... "I Believe", "Always",
"Everyday", because I am still "Standing", I will
continue now and forever
to "Keep the Faith!"...because we are truly blessed

You blame this love on rock and roll
You have started a fire, a passion
That is out of control
Your heart has touched mine
Lasting memories of "The Distance"
In a city called Anaheim
You standing alone in the spotlight.
A starry sky around you like a halo
You have touched my heart, my soul
my life.....

Now the time has come for endings
But with all things come anew
Be not a sad or a fallen angel
but a Jovi fan strong and true.

Hold fast to the memories we have shared together
And look forward to many more
Cause you know the boys from New Jersey
will be back to rock and roll
our lives once more...

Never say good bye
only say good night
never walk away....
You are the shinning star
In the blinding light....


Thank You Bon Jovi for the past 20 years....
and for Giants 8/8...a night I will never forget!!!!

Your fan forever
an Always.....

Carolyn
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Old 08-22-2003, 05:12 PM
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wow, this is really a nice poem, well done
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Old 08-22-2003, 06:10 PM
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That's really good!! Thanks for sharing.

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I love this poem so much, it makes me shiver
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Great poem! Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Old 08-22-2003, 08:53 PM
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Wow! That's really good STAR! It really touched me - well done!
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Old 08-22-2003, 09:29 PM
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Star, I absolutely love the poem. I saw it before on the bj.com boards, but didn't have time to tell you how wonderful I think it is! Hope you got my email hun, missed ya!
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Old 08-23-2003, 12:10 AM
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Hey my little Jelly bean...yes I got you mail and I will respond later tonight..glad you are home safe and sound...Missed you sooo!!!...Glad you got a chance to read the poem, I was gonna send it to you and the review of Giants and the Jersey road trip..to funny huh...No Always, but In These Arms and The Distance special requested for me ....amazing...loved it...talk at ya later...STAR (your So Cal MOM!!)..
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Old 08-23-2003, 02:43 AM
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I like your poem, Star. I've written songs about the boys, myself. I wrote several about Jon and one that's partially about David, so far. I'm working on one for Richie.
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Old 08-24-2003, 05:51 PM
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There's not much more to say.
Absolutely fantastic, Star.
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